Usualy a foul night is not what I am fond of. The heavy rain with high wind in a summer night makes me feel bad, adding an element of loneliness, creepiness, and isolation.
But the rain and wind under your writing is a fascinating exception. The vivid description of a series of movements and sounds performed by the nature is a masterpiece, creating a wonderful image of a lively rain and fall. This is the piece that will top all your other poems. do you think i am exagerating??? :)))
你这篇写的很棒!非常巧妙的把一副生动形象的风雨画面呈现在我们面前。这些词汇选的很妙,很有韵味,既增加了音韵美,又非常形象连贯,读起来节奏感很强, 很有美感。。。
最后又动到静的转换, 由物到人的转换,意境上得到了升华。
it is another masterpiece.
Usualy a foul night is not what I am fond of. The heavy rain w
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• you write very well. -veryfar- ♀ (422 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 15:22:31
• Wind and rain raging outside -tern2- ♀ (159 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 21:29:49
• 你真是大高手 -veryfar- ♀ (183 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 21:33:32
• 我来翻 -follower- ♀ (131 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 22:33:39
• 高翻啊高翻! -tern2- ♀ (348 bytes) () 07/07/2011 postreply 06:07:22
• 是你的诗写的妙 -follower- ♀ (17 bytes) () 07/07/2011 postreply 06:56:26