节奏感真强，读起来真美，喝醉啦真好。

The 1st 14-line stanza has a very beautiful rhythmic and metrical pattern.

I do enjoy reading this poem.

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• sharp ear and eye. indeed, the first stanza was done while i was -falsetruth- ♀ (63 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:34:45

• the first stanza was done while i was drinking -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:56:04

• to be more exact, (you should say) -cicila- ♀ (386 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:23:35

• haha yes I drank at least 80 proof of vodka:) -falsetruth- ♀ (110 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:00:06

• not just that. -cicila- ♀ (108 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:03:19

• I see:) I didn't know that 二锅头 really made it:) -falsetruth- ♀ (39 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:58:46