【我与AI】以原创七绝测试AI的英译水平

As the author, I am in a better position to judge my translator, be it an AI or otherwise. 

平水韵拙作：

苦茶甘味酒无缘，壶吐香魂淡淡烟。 

去日天涯轻一顾，半生风雨到窗前。

……

ChatGPT英译：

Bitter tea, sweet wine hold no relation,

Pouring out fragrance, a light smoke rises.

Yesterday's journey to the horizon, just a glance, 

Half a life of wind and rain, arrives at the window.

……

My feedback:

ChatGPT didn't make the grade. Indeed, poetry is above its pay grade. It has little sense of aesthetics, if at all. 

 

Author: Ren Qiulan 

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• 哈，我也做了类似的测试。让AI写诗，古诗格律基本都是错的。现代诗也是中小学水平，八股味。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 16:47:43

• 谢谢盈盈！AI比人最不足之处是情商（EQ），严重缺乏同理心。诗歌是情感的升华，机器何来灵性呢？ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 17:22:13

• I won't blame AI for failing to follow the classical rules. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:46:48

• 半生风雨到窗前。这句是真的好。每次读都忍不住赞。。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 17:01:53

• 人在天涯吧。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 17:26:26

• Would you be kind enough to translate my punchline? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:41:33

• 那需要好好领会一下这句诗的意味深长 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2023 postreply 13:09:26

• 无缘翻译成no relation：）想知道你的英文版本会翻译成什么样：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:34:42

• Thank you! I can't wait to see your version. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:37:38

• Why don't you give it a shot? It's open season on chatGPT. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:39:48

• 在英文翻译方面，我还得和你学：）等你的版本：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:41:08

• You are working in an English-speaking setting. Come on! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:42:33

• Alas, chapGPT couldn't even make a complete sentence. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/15/2023 postreply 21:45:04

• 哈哈，我在摄坛看到了这个AI 翻译的还挺Chinglish, So is in ur case, -移花接木- ♂ (330628 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 05:27:30

• Thank you! In your case AI wasn't that far off the mark. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 07:28:06

• 好通透的一首七绝，人淡如茶，唯风雅赏。 -送赞干部- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 06:06:51

• Thank you! Just another attempt of mine, no more & no less. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 07:29:44

• "Indeed, poetry is above its pay grade", totally agree! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 07:59:43

• 谢谢小西！人工智能是数学的载体。人却可以诗数兼容、兼融。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2023 postreply 09:08:23