英诗习作一首

        The Garage Sale

            Today I passed by Post Street,

     There the great mansions are located.

     Following the arrows flying,

     I got the last place where you were hiding.


         Modern Poetry is over fifty years old, then

    A guy said：“ My grandpa’s, pay what you can.”

         Your handwriting, your sigh and smile,

         Between pages mixed with a moldy smell.

         I put the book in the sunshine in my home,

         Now you’ll feel bright and warm.

         I know some years later, somewhere,

         My fate will be the same as well.

                               
                                             Sept. 28, 2013   

                                My first English Poem

                                      By Li Shen                                

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• 第一首诗就写得这么好. 赞! -~叶子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 14:57:48

• 谢叶子鼓励。俺就是喜欢文学，不爱英语。被逼无奈才 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 18:58:27

• 捡起学，耗费俺精力时间无数也。请多指教。 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 19:01:01

• The book is so lucky to be treasured,wonderful Gif effect,Lively -京燕花园- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 15:35:55

• 谢京花点评！动漫谬赞也！不好意思，趣图在网上顺来。我博客上注明，这里懒了。多指教。 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 19:08:44

• Nice poem! -南山松- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 17:10:55

• 谢南山松读评！请多多批评。 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 19:14:06

• 写的精彩,欢迎沈漓来美语坛,也欢迎你参加美语坛的春之声活动： -紫君- ♀ (1067 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 20:44:36

• 谢谢紫君。紫气东来，敢不从命？我会努力参加，尽情欣赏。：） -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 21:53:32

• You are very positive！：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 21:39:45

• Thanks! But beautifulwind,where were you last -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 22:00:43

• last winter？People missed u sooo much!:) -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 22:10:03

• You are a new comer here, aren't you? Nice to see you! -beautifulwind- ♀ (24 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 22:18:03

• Oh,last winter was so cold that people...yr name,imagination:) -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2014 postreply 08:46:25