Thanks for the comments! Jingbei.

NewVoice · 2011-08-07 02:39:47Z

Thanks for the comments! Jingbei.简介

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回答: great writing. 探讨一下您的修改。由 jingbeiboy 于 2011-08-06 23:04:13

1. “made me uncomfortably self-conscious"

Your version is good. But somehow I still like my version "a feeling of uncomfortable self-consciousness" better. 好像听起来更顺一点.

2. You are right. But as 文青 suggested and Carpediem accepted, "Those days are gone" may be better than "Those days are history".

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