ok, convinced about the self-conciousness sentence now.

"eat dinners" just sounds weird. would you say: we always eat dinners at 6pm.?

btw, skim/skim through. I asked my lg, he said no big difference there. it seems if it's something long, or a book, you will use "skim through". But if it's a short article, "through" is not so necessary. So in your case, without "through" is ok.

typo in your correction above: you left out "are" in "those days are gone". yup, that's how picky I am.

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• 往前翻了几页，文青你的party文写的很棒，有一个词 -lilac09- ♀ (34 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 14:39:54

• Cool word! thanks a lot, Lilac! -非文学青年- ♀ (91 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 21:57:02

• 也有道理~~ -lilac09- ♀ (178 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 06:22:08

• Good suggestion! -非文学青年- ♀ (101 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 08:57:37

• 怕mm误会，跑到老电脑上用中文回一下，英文不给力。 -非文学青年- ♀ (119 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 10:24:54

• 哈哈~ MM想多了，没有误会的说 -lilac09- ♀ (647 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 14:11:24

• 文青没想多，是俺想多了。好，期待好文。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 16:04:54

• CO:期待好文 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 16:38:44

• Ms. Perfectionist, I've updated it as you suggested... again:) -carpediem- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 17:47:25