I got a chance to let a native speaker to listen your reading today, but only the first sentence as we run out of the time. she told me your curiously,permanent and display needs more work.
curiously sounds lei, not li:.
permanent is not so correct.
display the stress is wrong.
For your information. Hope you don't mind.
curiously sounds lei, not li:.
permanent is not so correct.
display the stress is wrong.
For your information. Hope you don't mind.