朗读练习, 望指教：Cheetah

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读的时候挺满意，听录音时就觉得问题不少了。望各位不吝赐教，我想看看和我自己的感觉是否一致。原视频中无文稿，以下是我自己从youtube视频（Why you can't outrun a cheetah）中听来的：


The cheetah is undisputed king of
speed, holding natures's land speed record for 10 million consecutive
years. It reaches top speeds of 75 miles per hour. But its accelation
is what's  truely impressive. It leaves most of the world's fastest
super cars in its dust. The Ferrari , Lamborghini, or Mclaren is no
match. 0-60 in 3 seconds or just 3 strides. Aerodynamics and light
weight frame enable this astonishing accelaration. Weighing in only
125 lbs, its muscles don't have to carry much weight, translating
into its accelaraton instead. And the small head, flatened rib cage
and slender legs minimize air resistance.

Once it reaches top speed, unique
design features sustain the speed. The cheetah has extremely flexible
spine as well as pivoting hips and shoulder blades that are not
attached to the collar bone. This allows the front and rear legs to
stretch further apart when fully extended and move closer together
when the feet come under its body increasing the cheetah's stride
length to an amazing 25 feet. The cheetah moves so quickly that its
feet spend more time in the air than on the ground, twice during each
stride having all 4 feet off the ground at the same time. In a high
speed chase, the long muscular tail works as a stabilizing rodder.
Even its feet are modified for speed. Unlike other cats, cheetahs'
foot pads are hard and flat like tire treads and their short blunt
claws do not retract completely like lions and lepoards. They are
designed for grip like the cleats on the track field. These
modifications provide cheetah with increased traction, fast sharp
turns.

 

 

 

 

 

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• 加上 text了，你可以再进去看看。多谢鼓励。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 05:47:24

• 可以读成mil, 但我可能读得太重了。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 05:59:34

• Excellent ! -Marauders- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:02:05

• 谢鼓励。我的语调还要下很大工夫。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:09:46

• 您来求意见,说说我的印象,不对请见谅!总体感觉非常好,每个单词发音都很好. -hopeinhope- ♀ (332 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:42:17

• 你的点评很到位，这正是我需要努力的地方。多谢！ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 06:44:31

• 嘿嘿，乱评两句比读一段文章容易。应该向你学习。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (69 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 10:07:02

• 你的绕口令读得很绝。声音也像是在哪听过。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (39 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 15:10:11

• 我不混歌坛啊。向你学习,我也录一个cheetah. -hopeinhope- ♀ (2371 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 07:51:31

• What a familiar voice! It's as good as before, Sis :) -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:33:43

• 好嘛，你从哪里蹦出来的？ -hopeinhope- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:50:14

• hahaha, I am your follower :) -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:57:26

• 热烈欢迎浮出水面。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (39 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:41:40

• 我本来也想找你的，可是你换了名字，酱哥名字没怎么变，一下给我找到了。 -dandelion1- ♂ (35 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 10:12:01

• 我喜欢这里的氛围，不像以前那个地方。 -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:00:47

• 这里确实是好地方。我有大开眼界的感觉 -hopeinhope- ♀ (72 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:27:23

• Well, well well -dandelion1- ♂ (103 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 10:32:27

• 流利自信抑扬顿挫。我猜对了。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:39:07

• 顺便，此处的编辑器可以嵌入链接，点”切换”即可找到。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:51:34

• Thanks,我琢磨一下。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:53:11

• 几乎是用母语读的感觉。想请教一下：语速怎样会练得如此之快呢？ -淋雨- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/03/2014 postreply 09:40:08

• 您过讲了。帖子沉到第二页，没注意还有人看。您可把我问住了。 -hopeinhope- ♀ (597 bytes) () 09/04/2014 postreply 05:32:27

• 语言模仿能力是一种天赋，you are rich at this. -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/04/2014 postreply 08:05:17

• 她练过绕口令，读得很清楚，应当有所帮助。你可以听听。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/04/2014 postreply 11:32:54

• 读的很好！谢谢分享：） -南山松- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 10:00:39

• 谢鼓励！共同提高。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 15:11:27

• 读得有气势,很专业！想起以前京北也读得这么好！ -京燕花园- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 12:19:56

• 谢版主鼓励。新来乍到，不知哪位是京北大侠？ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 15:14:37

• Jingbeiboy, we haven't seen him for a long time. -京燕花园- ♀ (132 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 18:27:44

• 多谢你提供的链接，省了我不少时间。京北这篇文章不易读好，感觉他的连读挺老练地道。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2014 postreply 03:19:32

• 我也是初来乍到.不知道你注意到没有,总坛右边汇总链接,各路高手如云,写作,翻译,朗诵,语音，演唱，配音 -hopeinhope- ♀ (175 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 04:03:15

• 注意到了，不过还没一一细看。与你有同感，喜欢这里的氛围。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 05:08:31

• 听了京北以前的那段配音，有耳目一新之感。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 05:14:58

• Very good indeed! 相当不错的美语朗读，那些美语特点的 -anke_ba- ♂ (85 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 17:03:56

• 多谢赞扬。听过你的录音，语调方面还要向你学习。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 17:26:53

• Wow, 读得真是好极了。 欢迎winterstorm常来美语坛。 -珈玥- ♀ (529 bytes) () 08/30/2014 postreply 19:15:13

• 多谢褒扬。确实还有不少需要提高的地方。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2014 postreply 03:09:33

• 不错，又上一层楼 -淋雨- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2014 postreply 20:34:29

• 多谢！ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/01/2014 postreply 03:34:45

• Wow, great! -小公主- ♀ (61 bytes) () 09/01/2014 postreply 16:25:23

• Keep practicing. There is no other way around. You will improve -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/01/2014 postreply 17:09:40

• 酱哥读得还是那么好。语调上要是能抑扬一些就更好了。这样给人的感觉不会那么硬。：） -dandelion1- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 08:36:21

• 世界真小！网络世界更小！ -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 09:04:14

• 哇，地道的美语，欢迎您常来哈. -~叶子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 16:46:12

• 版主过奖。一定常来讨教。 -winterstorm9- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/02/2014 postreply 18:53:10