回复：好久没认真读了，新900(4)，大家砸吧！ - 读的是好!

 （注意，对你这高手是要鸡蛋里挑骨头啊）一点小建议，小千，也希望听听你的意见。

it is pretty FORmal -> 'formal’ 的第一个音节偏‘鄂’ 音了，应稍微偏向‘奥’音： 'formal /fc ml/ not /fuh ml/'。

in my size -> 'my' 的元音应饱满，否则有点 /e/的音了。'my' needs to be fully pronounced (not stressed though.)

do you think thiS Sweater -> 两个‘s’在一起的连读，读一个s音，但要相对长一些. 'this sweater' : the linking of the two 's', ie, the sound 's' needs be a little bit longer to show that there are two 's' here.

look good on me -> 'look good' seems strange here. ' look’ 的音节偏‘鄂’ 音了，应稍微偏向‘屋’音

What length of skirt -> 't' 音在这儿最好失去爆破，'of' 音弱读成'v'音比较好。 't' in 'what' needs be unexploded (unreleased); 'of' be weakened as 'v':     Wha(t) length'v skirt.

basic patterns -> 'basic' be less stressed than 'patterns'
He had to go return a gift -> had to go RETURN a gift
They have sold out the brand -> They uhv sold out the brand
How much -> rising tone is better than that of falling tone here;

所有跟帖： 

• 疯了疯了！！！哈哈。不过也只有bill的耳朵能听找到这些骨头。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/28/2011 postreply 22:31:29

• 你太厉害了！ -小淘- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/28/2011 postreply 22:32:47

• 更上一层楼呀。But in 小千's defense, -jingbeiboy- ♂ (75 bytes) () 04/28/2011 postreply 22:49:42

• oh I accept that ... her brilliant reading does serve a model. -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/28/2011 postreply 23:01:31

• Bill~~哼哼～看我一会儿回来怎么收拾你！！ ^v^ -千与.千寻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/29/2011 postreply 05:59:02

• 天，我听了就一个骨头找不出，只觉得顺耳。你上面对我是太宽容了。 -DCH- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/29/2011 postreply 03:55:09

• 对bill肃然起敬啊，这么厉害怎么也不点评我们的，是不是不屑啊，你说实话。 -cutestream- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/29/2011 postreply 05:59:56

• 他怕我们承受不起，哼哼，小瞧我们脸皮的厚度，哈哈。 -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/29/2011 postreply 08:42:38

• 对不起，我是没时间。我更觉得小千让人尊敬了。牺牲自己的时间来给大家纠音。 -billnet- ♂ (61 bytes) () 04/29/2011 postreply 12:28:10