bear，新年快乐！

才发现这一版你做了一点改动。经这么一点修改，诗歌太太流畅了。意思也更通顺。

好诗啊：）

所有跟帖： 

• 还有，以后你要跟紫君阿美好好学学制贴。 -fearcpatest- ♀ (39 bytes) () 01/01/2011 postreply 21:52:32

• haha ok. -bearsback- ♂ (92 bytes) () 01/02/2011 postreply 01:00:51

• sad, i missed the day:( -fearcpatest- ♀ (83 bytes) () 01/02/2011 postreply 01:27:16

• even worse -fearcpatest- ♀ (121 bytes) () 01/02/2011 postreply 01:49:07

• cold. -fearcpatest- ♀ (158 bytes) () 01/02/2011 postreply 02:01:41

• hehehe nice haiku poems! -bearsback- ♂ (82 bytes) () 01/02/2011 postreply 08:01:35

• 前天看了六世达赖的３行３行一段的诗，就想起来haiku。 -fearcpatest- ♀ (391 bytes) () 01/02/2011 postreply 13:07:13

• I am so sorry to hear that -bearsback- ♂ (124 bytes) () 01/02/2011 postreply 16:49:50