酒后的几个半句

over bump, over hump
through corn, through thorn
over ridge, over bridge,
through wind, through wave
i go, i go, i go
from west to midwest
from midwest to east
i go, i go, i go
with burns, with blisters
through fire, through freeze
o, rain, whip me
to make me swift
o, snow, freeze me
to tame the flame

i long for the hour
of eternity
when eyes meet:
love in hers
lust in mine
and vice versa
in this hour
words are extra
so are scarves, sleeves
and slacks
but movements speak
leopards leap
tigers tumble
observing the merge

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• 节奏感真强，读起来真美，喝醉啦真好。 -cicila- ♀ (110 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 07:50:19

• sharp ear and eye. indeed, the first stanza was done while i was -falsetruth- ♀ (63 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:34:45

• the first stanza was done while i was drinking -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:56:04

• to be more exact, (you should say) -cicila- ♀ (386 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:23:35

• haha yes I drank at least 80 proof of vodka:) -falsetruth- ♀ (110 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:00:06

• not just that. -cicila- ♀ (108 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:03:19

• I see:) I didn't know that 二锅头 really made it:) -falsetruth- ♀ (39 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 19:58:46

• seems u went to party last night, a friendly reminder: -fearcpatest- ♀ (317 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 12:15:34

• thank you!!! i did not know much of etiquette in this regard -falsetruth- ♀ (82 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:38:44

• LOL. Then did you get gifts from your enemies -cicila- ♀ (349 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:49:47

• very true. Enimies are the real judges (friends only flatter). -falsetruth- ♀ (30 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:08:43

• Lenin? -cicila- ♀ (99 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:54:25

• no gift from enimies. but they have made me braver:) -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:25:38

• 酒后赋诗，想必真切。 -斓婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 14:49:15

• true, very true except it is hard to decipher -falsetruth- ♀ (155 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 16:44:35

• lol...Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. -斓婷- ♀ (72 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 17:07:37

• Thank you. Ben was great. He was the man of wine and wit:) -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/25/2010 postreply 18:03:58