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Jay was born to ride. Just after learning to walk, he got his first tricycle. A year later he was on a bicycle with training wheels. At the age of five he was a skilled bicyclist, able to jump off ramps and fly through the air. His father made sure he did everything safely. Jay wore a helmet, a chest pad, elbow pads, and knee pads. He fell a lot, but he was never hurt badly.
He got his first motorcycle when he was seven. His father put the motorcycle in the back of his pickup and drove Jay out to the desert almost every weekend. Jay became a skilled rider. He entered motocross races all over the county. By the time he was 15, he had won 30 races. His future looked bright.
When he was 17, Jay took his girlfriend out for a ride on his motorcycle. A truck ran a red light, and Jay and his girlfriend crashed into the side of the truck. Jay went into the hospital for three months. His girlfriend died immediately.
Jay didn’t ride a motorcycle again for 10 years. Then one weekend he bought a used Kawasaki. He took it out for a test run at dusk. It felt good to ride again. He got it up to 110 miles an hour on the local freeways. A highway patrol car chased him for about ten minutes, but he finally lost it in the freeway traffic and the dark. When he got home, he was excited. That was fun, he thought.

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欢迎枫叶加入美语论坛朗读队伍。 -美语世界- 给 美语世界 发送悄悄话 美语世界 的博客首页 (4173 bytes) () 11/21/2010 postreply 09:23:43

try again. -枫叶枫叶- 给 枫叶枫叶 发送悄悄话 枫叶枫叶 的博客首页 (1721 bytes) () 11/21/2010 postreply 09:39:41

在你的主帖里,点击[编辑],就可以把这个有声音的音频放进主帖里。 -美语世界- 给 美语世界 发送悄悄话 美语世界 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/21/2010 postreply 09:43:04

可以听到了,读得好。 -美语世界- 给 美语世界 发送悄悄话 美语世界 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/21/2010 postreply 10:44:38

说几句,不过不够具体 -全国牙防组- 给 全国牙防组 发送悄悄话 (239 bytes) () 11/22/2010 postreply 09:11:44

谢谢全防的鼓励和回复。你提的3点都重要啊 -枫叶枫叶- 给 枫叶枫叶 发送悄悄话 枫叶枫叶 的博客首页 (542 bytes) () 11/22/2010 postreply 11:01:48

稍微具体点的建议 -全国牙防组- 给 全国牙防组 发送悄悄话 (220 bytes) () 11/22/2010 postreply 14:29:21

读得很好!谢谢分享! -billnet- 给 billnet 发送悄悄话 billnet 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/22/2010 postreply 18:54:11

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