半个十四行: 她

how much i fear to speak
before a thousand eyes
yet, one pair so mystic
eases me with surprise

a thousand ears hear
only two listen
a thousand eyes stare
only two glisten

no soul so true
no heart so pure
no mind so keen
no smile so real

o, what is her name?
she's kindled a flame

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• 期待另一半。 -福田- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 14:59:28

• haha, it's her turn:) -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 16:57:02

• 请你转告她，我在这里期待。 -福田- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:14:07

• SHE -北京二号- ♀ (404 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 15:00:20

• beauty or beast, i will remember till the day i die:) -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:04:26

• 请教诗人：“半个十四行诗”和“十四行诗”有什么区别呀？ -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 15:13:01

• haha, i am glad you asked. 半个十四行诗 is a new form of 十四行诗 -falsetruth- ♀ (780 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:20:57

• 谢诗人详细专业的回复，我得认真学习。 -紫君- ♀ (69 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:41:08

• 谢谢你的专业水平的提问，我来陪读。也谢诗人。 -福田- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:45:24

• 福田真谦虚,你的双语诗歌精彩,诗人也. -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:53:58

• 傻不傻？半个十四行也隐含半个桑那诗人的意思了。 -亦冬- ♀ (146 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:18:28

• 大圆250，存起从不赌，利息0。1，何年当地主？哈哈 -falsetruth- ♀ (8 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:33:36

• 夸你两句: -亦冬- ♀ (135 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:28:17

• nice, I like it. Nicely ryhmed. You may not believe me -falsetruth- ♀ (401 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:43:26

• 反正也是闲着，跟你一个。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (302 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 06:47:49

• -->> with dew her eyes glisten -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 06:54:46

• hahaha 'this line I should undo' is so cute, I couldn't help lau -falsetruth- ♀ (46 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 07:52:40