请帮忙看看这句话有没有语病? 谢谢. 在线等~~~

"He noted that the major problem he has encountered at the workplace is that people tend to write overly technical regardless of their audience. This could reduce the efficiency in communicating important information."

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• Corrections -lessisnotmore- ♀ (306 bytes) () 02/14/2010 postreply 18:04:17

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