In a bustling space
Plum-stone shines jade.
• 我不懂诗。第一句这样好吗: Surfing on the waves of net -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/03/2009 postreply 15:36:42
• 嗯,better。 -任我为- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/03/2009 postreply 16:31:19
• 不是5音。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/04/2009 postreply 08:21:38
• very good. i like it -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/03/2009 postreply 17:59:11
• ZT:我现在很后悔很无奈,爹妈咋没让我跟你同龄?ha -念亲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/03/2009 postreply 19:03:49
• 好!就是有点不sure:the second line has 7 syllables? -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/04/2009 postreply 07:57:29