very good, some suggestions if you want to know

1. from recording, -ing has been dropped (hearing, being)
2. Short senetences are well done, but long sentence runs out of breath. The intonation falled flat for long sentences;
3. long i vowl is not well pronounced;
4. "morning" is not pronounced correctly;
5. you spoke very fast, so long vowls are not elonged properly;
6," -So you thought about it, huh?" -- it might need a break before huh. if you imitated someone, i have nothing to say.
7. I asked a kid born and educated in US, he thought you stressed consonants too much, so it sounded a little weird to him. I have troubled in those areas also.

The whole recording is an excellent piece to chinese. Those are suggestions if you want to get some feedbacks and improvise yourself.

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• 我是模仿原文，原文读的更快，“ing”不是被drop了，而是鼻音发的快而短 -小千...千与千寻- ♀ (294 bytes) () 10/07/2009 postreply 06:52:37