The sun keeps working (5 syllables)
on a tear for eighteen months (7)
He takes the day off (5)
to propose to his true love(7)
with a golden diamond ring (7)
(Pic from Internet)
Tanka这种形式,
又有数字,又有诗意,很好玩!
欢迎大家接着来玩!
The sun keeps working (5 syllables)
on a tear for eighteen months (7)
He takes the day off (5)
to propose to his true love(7)
with a golden diamond ring (7)
(Pic from Internet)
Tanka这种形式,
又有数字,又有诗意,很好玩!
欢迎大家接着来玩!
• Nice try! This poem needs to be read out to count syllibles. -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (167 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 16:42:26
• It's also very imaginative. -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 16:47:14
• 盈盈是音节专家!:)on a tear是idiom,having great success over a period -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 17:36:13
• of time.也不知道这么用对吗? -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 17:36:57
• Very imaginative! With a diamond ring to propose! Love it! -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 19:48:42
• 谢谢暖冬MM鼓励!我又看了昨天Tanka诗的例子,发现要用复合句,然后那几个画面联系起来就写成了:)propose后面 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 20:15:58
• 应该有to,我为了凑音节,就把lifelong改成true了:) -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 20:17:01
• 你也来练练吧!我发现写的过程是真正把知识变成自己的过程,写出来很开心:) -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 20:19:30
• 写诗太难了,需要灵感:)先多读你们的,谢谢妖mm! -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2024 postreply 21:21:29