我的英文梅花诗部分

About little

 

Sha Yan

 

I bought a little scarlet candle

And a little penguin clay candle holder

Scarlet scarlet little to see see

Up stream little spirit lifted to be

 

Little thought, it will be a little

 

Ps. Revision

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• 梅花门往往没开张就倒闭了 -胡华泠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/04/2024 postreply 21:01:34

• 一首中文梅花诗“贵人识”做样本 -胡华泠- ♂ (157 bytes) () 02/04/2024 postreply 21:15:55

• 谢谢分享英文梅花诗 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2024 postreply 07:11:04

• 谢谢盈盈来玩 -胡华泠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/07/2024 postreply 20:25:48

• 赞胡兄好意境！ -抓住美景- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2024 postreply 11:10:29

• 谢谢 -胡华泠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/07/2024 postreply 20:26:22

• Is the grammar of“see see” correct? -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2024 postreply 14:20:27

• doesn't matter， it actually is a Chinese expression. -胡华泠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2024 postreply 14:32:20

• why? It is a poem. -胡华泠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/07/2024 postreply 03:30:15