Metaverse of Mysteries

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Metaverse of Mysteries

Behind each door, a world unseen,
A realm of mystery, realms between.
Once entered and closed it, wonders began to shift,
In a labyrinth of enigmas, souls adrift.

Thousands of doors, infinite they may,
Familiar and curious, in their display.
Old or new, each a lure and a call,
In our metaverse, mysteries enthrall.

On shelves they stand, a spectral array,
Inviting spirit of wisdom with our stay. 
Wondering which door where we lost?
Swimming through secrets, we will find the way.

Yet, amidst the metaverse, at least one door I knew,
A flash to where your essence once flew.
At random, yet guided by fate, 
I opened it, not a moment too late :+) ~~~~~ 

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Very well-written with thoughtfully conceived ideas! -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 17:59:31

Every book is like a door to the unknown, old or new -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 18:00:20

A twist in the last stanza, like it :) -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 18:01:53

If drawing a dragon, that should be the eyes. glad you -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (47 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:01:16

The dragon eye :) -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 21:07:08

:+)) -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 21:35:02

Somehow, this poem reminds me of an audio book I recently -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (56 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 18:13:41

谢谢您喜欢!started from the idea of a palace, but -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:17:50

But it is too concrete, so think of ‘metaverse of mysteries’ -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:19:38

Then a book as a door to unknown mysteries, -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:23:00

The bookstore is a local house, very unique/antique style -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:25:44

Thanks for sharing your thought process! -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:48:39

We like to visit old bookstores too. -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:49:54

Every city we went, we checked out some old bookstores :) -甜虫虫- 给 甜虫虫 发送悄悄话 甜虫虫 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:50:22

A flash to where your essence once flew. -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:29:44

The poem is enchanting.Full of imagery that captivates soul -盈盈一笑间- 给 盈盈一笑间 发送悄悄话 盈盈一笑间 的博客首页 (167 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:31:16

谢谢盈盈!希望如您所说。刚刚学写,还在找感觉。。。请多赐教!!~~~~ -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:06:39

There areMany possibilities before realized in only one way. -方外居士- 给 方外居士 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 21:18:40

Absolutely!~~~~ -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 22:16:46

beautiful, taste like sonnets -颤音- 给 颤音 发送悄悄话 颤音 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 10:17:45

呵呵,谢谢颤音鼓励!sonnets多了两行:)~~~~~ -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 18:39:44

Intriguing! If you just started, you're already skillful! -godog- 给 godog 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 11:52:41

谢谢G 诗友!英文诗刚开始学写。不过中文古诗词新诗都写了好多年了。其实都一样,需要的是感觉一下英文的韵律 -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 18:44:09

Excellent rhyming~ -妖妖灵- 给 妖妖灵 发送悄悄话 妖妖灵 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 17:34:15

谢谢您来读!祝冬安!~~~ -遍野- 给 遍野 发送悄悄话 遍野 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 18:55:45

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