《鹧鸪天》神州梦

（词林正韵第二部平声）

一聚兰亭两晋郎：左思研墨右军旁。*
毫端点出云端彩，身外飞来世外香。
龙影舞，凤眉扬，风骚何处不炎黄？
春雷交响英雄曲，古国新民理旧疆。

* 左思，西晋文豪；右军，东晋书圣。

Yán Huáng, personifying Chinese ancestry, may look and sound distant in the past but, in fact, can't be closer to the heart of every Chinese who cares to be forward-looking.

Standing on the broad shoulders of Yán Huáng, today's Chinese have the dawning horizon rising before them.

With vision, a golden age is in sight.

作者：纫秋兰

 

 

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• 一聚兰亭两晋郎：左思研墨右军旁。七律多用典故。这里的典故用得漂亮！晚上好，秋兰。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:10:10

• 谢谢，盈盈晚上好！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:20:02

• 炎黄can't be closer to the heart of every Chinese -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:28:21

• Yan Huang, in my opinion, is the bedrock of Chinese as -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:34:58

• a people and China as a nation. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:35:47

• 憧憬晓明，乐观来日。 -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:17:41

• 谢谢，蓝灵好！过去的改变不了，未来的有待塑造。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:22:15

• "with vision, a golden age is in sight. " I like it. -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:27:41

• Do you believe it? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:29:04

• In the future, I believe. -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:41:46

• The present? -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:50:13

• In the present, I see Arcus clouds. How can I -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:55:35

• believe in Arcus clouds? -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:55:58

• No, you don't believe in rolling storm clouds. I get that. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:07:37

• I believe that we are having the storm before the calm. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:09:50

• So you are an incurable optimist. I get that. Good night! -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:16:05

• I can't be more proud of being an incurable optimist. Hahaha -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:27:03

• Goodnight, 蓝灵! -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 20:28:09

• 问好蓝灵。好像在星空见过你。当时帮我回帖的是你吗？：） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:30:03

• 盈盈好！是吗？ -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:39:31

• 有点印象，希望我没记错。再次欢迎来美坛玩。：） -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:42:09

• 沒关係。感谢盈盈，给美坛带来活力。 -蓝灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/13/2023 postreply 19:48:34

• 左思研墨右军旁，秋兰妙笔左右逢源 ：） “毫端点出云端彩，身外飞来世外香”，两端两外世人赞！秋兰好诗，谢谢分享！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 09:17:47

• 秋兰妙用典故，大赞！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 09:41:39

• 用典，于我是一种得着，尤其是在用得其所的时候。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:28:25

• 谢谢小西！自问实在习作水平，边写边学而已。情怀倒是足以自珍的。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:26:25

• 秋兰太谦虚了。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:42:01

• Nice poem,full of positivity. -godog- ♂ (82 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 17:09:10

• Thank you, godog! Yes, call it sunny side up. -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/14/2023 postreply 20:31:00