《The Shadow of Speeding》《超速的影子》

The Shadow of Speeding

a police car runs after his
like a shadow of speeding

in the shadow, a ticket speaking:
fines help prevent dangers

the shadow of speeding turns into sunlights
in the distance

超速的影子

一辆警车追赶他的车
像个超速的影子

在影子里，一张罚单在说：
罚款有助于预防危险

超速的影子变成了阳光
在远处

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• 警察超速不算超速吗? -疏影笑寒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 08:21:57

• 哈哈哈，好问题! To catch up a speedy car, police must be speedy :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 08:50:14

• hhh, who writes them a speeding ticket? -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 09:26:47

• Haha, me! I'm following the police car :) 开个玩笑！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 09:30:46

• fun -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 09:26:56

• Thank you, 颤音！Your Light and Shadow series inspired me :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 09:35:53

• flattered and humbled -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 19:11:14

• It's about the rules in our society, they're not that bad :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 09:42:50

• Just like shadow, they can become sunlights. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 09:43:57

• fines help prevent dangers. Stay positive! :)) -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 10:24:19

• the shadow of speeding becomes sunlights in the distance -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 10:24:41

• 喜欢小西这种充满阳光的心态 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 10:25:25

• 随时随处用诗记录身边的事情，很棒！ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 10:33:15

• 谢谢盈盈的鼓励。生活就是诗，无处不在 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 11:40:53

• Yes, always stay positive, especially from the long run! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 11:39:08

• I got a few speeding tickets; my car demands it. -waterfowl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 12:07:35

• Hahaha, you spoiled your car! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 12:17:06

• 我的车觉得没被开超速罚单太丢脸。 哈哈 -waterfowl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 12:26:22

• 哈哈哈，你的车很为你争光啊。You have such a sense of humor, love it! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 12:36:40

• Shadow of speeding, still imagining what it is. -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 13:09:58

• The police car is the shadow of speeding. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:27:06

• 警车追赶超速的车，警车就像是那个超速的车的影子一样，二者形影不离。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:30:03

• 终于懂得了，有点深奥。哈哈哈，惭愧，惭愧！ -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:43:43

• No problem, you are good! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 21:05:11

• feels like the ticket is quite shady. -唐宋韵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 14:13:15

• Yes, at that moment you may feel it shady, -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:34:17

• but from the long run you would feel it sunny. 罚单有点忠言逆耳的味道。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:37:29

• 对于超速司机来说，罚单在当时是阴影（shadow），从长远看，罚单是阳光（sunlight），可以起到防患于未然的作用。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 21:17:28

• 唉，吃罚单还那么欢欣鼓舞，真行。 -唐宋韵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 08:00:15

• My poem is about the rules in our society, -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:24:32

• not just about a speeding ticket :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:26:00

• 不是欢欣鼓舞, just be positive :) 凡事要用辩证和长远的眼光去看待。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:32:06

• My poem was inspired by my observation -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:38:13

• and written by my imagination. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:42:29

• The speeding driver in the poem 是泛指。He could be anyone :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:48:32

• 诗歌是艺术，高于生活，不宜用太现实的眼光和心态去评判 ：） -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:49:18

• 赞寓意简洁的好诗！ -古树羽音- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 15:35:21

• Thank you! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:40:15

• The policeman may waive your ticket if he read the poem:)) -卫宁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 17:14:41

• Or show some cleavage/ legs...hahaha -waterfowl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 19:04:28

• I know you're just joking :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:56:44

• Good idea. But police needs to understand the poem first -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:14:01

• In case police doesn't get it, you can help now :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 21:04:01

• Haha, I’m afraid police may give me a ticket. -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 08:05:22

• Hahaha, just a joke. Don't take it seriously. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 09:54:38

• 哈哈哈，I’m joking too! -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 10:19:03

• I would print it and keep it in my car and give it a try :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:46:34

• Haha, it must be a good story, please update! :)) -卫宁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 08:14:35

• Hahaha, I was just kidding! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/07/2023 postreply 20:15:00

• Playful! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 17:24:40

• Thank you for your feedback. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/06/2023 postreply 20:53:51