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来源: kawanonagare 2023-02-02 09:33:02 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读: 次 (781 bytes)
回答: I used Snagit by TechSmith to catchwriteforfun2023-02-02 07:49:21

I thought about how to return the favor. I really like your book, so I thought the best thing I can do would be to give a bit of concrete suggestions. I think you need to revise the Introduction (Foreword) becasue it is the most important part of your work when you try to sell your manuscript to a publisher. so I took liberty to write the first sentence just to give an example.

When I was a teenage girl living in a remore village in China decades ago, My Dad would often talk to me about his experencie during the political turmoils that engulfed the country when he was a hight school teacher, generally considered as a member of the group of "anti-revoultoianry intellecturals" who bore the brunt of Chair Mao's policies. 

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Thanks so much for the changes you made. Will follow your -writeforfun- 给 writeforfun 发送悄悄话 writeforfun 的博客首页 (55 bytes) () 02/02/2023 postreply 10:09:59

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