填词试与莎士比亚唱和

Sonnet 47 by William Shakespeare 

 

Betwixt mine eye and heart a league is took,

And each doth good turns now unto the other:

When that mine eye is famish'd for a look,

Or heart in love with sighs himself doth smother,

With my love's picture then my eye doth feast,

And to the painted banquet bids my heart;

Another time mine eye is my heart's guest,

And in his thoughts of love doth share a part:

So, either by thy picture or my love,

Thy self away, art present still with me;

For thou not farther than my thoughts canst move,

And I am still with them, and they with thee;

   Or, if they sleep, thy picture in my sight

   Awakes my heart, to heart's and eyes' delight.

 

 

《江城子》

 

古今交界燕来声

远嘤鸣

近叮咛

绝唱惊尘

出世一诗灵

与我同飞何处去

修竹外

绕兰亭

 

流觞曲水说浮生

失峥嵘

得娉婷

眼底江山

心底祝升平

万代炎黃圆一梦

星雨夜

月乡晴

 

……

 

词林正韵第十一部平声

 

纫秋兰原创

 

所有跟帖： 

• 押韵漂亮，意境漂亮 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 14:24:29

• 谢谢灵版主！希望在意境上，可与莎翁作个中西唱和。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 14:56:21

• 谢谢花帅（跟版主说的）点赞！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 14:58:38

• 我除了读意境还八卦地数行数，会不会你也会去match莎翁的行数，哈！江城子不是14行是16行 -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 15:04:47

• 花帅是音乐人吧。十四行诗，跟《江城子》双调，虽不匹对，但是在节奏方面，相呼相应，也未可知。 -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 15:14:00

• 恭喜renqiulan。首页进来，谢谢网管，填词试与莎士比亚唱和 推荐成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 15:52:54

• 谢谢大家！ -renqiulan- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/03/2023 postreply 16:08:41

• 传说中的14行诗，得见真人，厉害了。 江城子有功力。牛人。 -jianchi9090- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/06/2023 postreply 15:28:26