Grandma's recipes

A tiny little book reads

like collecting every piece of the crumb

As birds' rapid eyes

screen for the lost home

 

I researched the book

And had barely found

The sweetest look

between a touch and a mind

 

The parsley grows every year

below the window like a spell

The rain cries every tear

only a chimney can gently tell

 

It was a rainy day

with a full taste of the past memories

And the smell swirled away

in grasses, flowers, and trees

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• The sweetest look between a touch and a mind... -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/30/2022 postreply 17:08:32

• 谢谢盈盈赏读：）You are always sweet, and being the sweetest -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 05:06:11

• 小k的诗，一定会注意押韵的，果然每段的隔行押韵，好有味道。 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/30/2022 postreply 20:54:18

• 灵妹妹知道我的软肋。。在厨房写东西，努加点味道 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 05:07:16

• 这首写得老道，看不出中式英语得任何痕迹了。 -枫林晓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/30/2022 postreply 23:07:43

• 谢谢谬赞，我没发现老道啊。我特地找我上小学的娃读了，经她审阅以后发的。我知道就是小学生的水平。 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 05:10:31

• 有点儿伤感有点儿甜的recipes -轻轻的我来- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 09:33:05

• 谢谢轻兄品：） -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 13:25:40

• 新朋友很棒。点过赞了。 周末愉快。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2022 postreply 16:22:26

• 恭喜小k。首页进来，谢谢网管，Grandma's recipes 推荐成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/01/2022 postreply 16:25:03

• 谢谢版主！ -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/02/2022 postreply 22:25:39