A door in the desert

A door in the desert

A door in the desert
stands wide and tall
alone without attached wall
But no one dares to avert
because people see through it an oasis
because people are chased by a crisis

Let's line up and walk through the door
Chants from the front of the crowd
Why can't we walk around the door
A murmur from the middle of the crowd
from a blind man's blind boar

vague © 10 hours ago, rhyme   
 

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HeartLess Smile - Sounded like something you would find in alice and wonderland. What a fun intriguing poem, good job and keep writing.

4 hours ago

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• a nice piece. bravo to vibrato! -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2022 postreply 20:07:00

• 谢谢绿！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 19:41:55

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• 谢谢110！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 19:42:19

• 赞！寓意深刻，blind sees better than those who can see. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2022 postreply 20:47:22

• 真好！这门的寓意是什么？写的是那扇窄门吗？ -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (278 bytes) () 07/14/2022 postreply 13:03:14

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