Down By the Salley Gardens BY WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

Down By the Salley Gardens

BY WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

 

Down by the salley gardens

   my love and I did meet;

She passed the salley gardens

   with little snow-white feet.

She bid me take love easy,

   as the leaves grow on the tree;

But I, being young and foolish,

   with her would not agree.

 

In a field by the river

   my love and I did stand,

And on my leaning shoulder

   she laid her snow-white hand.

She bid me take life easy,

   as the grass grows on the weirs;

But I was young and foolish,

   and now am full of tears.   

 

试着翻译，被笑是民国风

 

悠悠垂柳园

 

悠悠垂柳园

有我心爱相依陪， 

她漫步穿柳园

纤足盈莹似雪飞

嘱我爱情需柔缓

当如枝梢叶萌芽；

悔我年少又痴狂，

执意不从她。

 

河畔芳草田

有我心爱相倚傍，

纤手栖我肩

玉指润白如雪扬。

嘱我生活宜释然，

当如青草择堰昌；

悔我年少又痴狂，

今夕泪满裳。

 

 

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• 好圣洁的歌声，翻译得像民国风？还真挺像！：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2022 postreply 13:04:44

• 好听的歌。翻译的确有民国风。很有韵味。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (1205 bytes) () 06/20/2022 postreply 18:16:15

• 好诗好翻，可参加《少年》活动，狂也许重了点？（虽压韵些），年少而不懂，或直接年少又无知：） -AP33912- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/20/2022 postreply 19:20:00

• 民国风很好很优美！！歌词不怕笑，只怕没有韵味 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2022 postreply 07:12:38

• 赞！ -天玉之- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2022 postreply 12:09:18

• 谢谢 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/21/2022 postreply 16:36:41

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• 谢谢版主 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2022 postreply 08:14:32

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