凑兴译《江雪》，加献拙译 《登鸛雀楼》和《春晓》

柳宗元《江雪》

千山鸟飞绝
万径人踪灭
孤舟蓑笠翁
独钓寒江雪

《Snowy River》

Amid ten hundreds of hills, eradicated of birds in hover
And ten thousands of trails, sterile of traces of a hiker
An elder in a lone boat, in a straw cloak and a bamboo hat
Is angling in solitude, in the chill of the snowy river

 

王之渙《登鸛雀楼》

白日依山尽
黄河入海流
欲穷千里目
更上一层楼

《Ascend Guanque Tower》

Down the mountain lingers a bright sun
Into the sea winds the Yellow River's run
To exhaust a thousand-mile view
I ascended to the next level anew

孟浩然《春晓》

春眠不觉晓
处处闻啼鸟
夜来风雨声
花落知多少

《A Spring Dawn》

A spring slumber made me sleep over the dawn
While bird chirpings were heard all around
With wind and rain clamoring all night long
I wondered how many petals were on the ground

 

所有跟帖： 

• 沙发！太棒啦！梅雨潭诗意盎然。。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 08:35:36

• 盈盈见笑 -老键- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 08:53:54

• 赞键哥！ -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 08:51:06

• 问好颤音兄 -老键- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:23:30

• 哇，这是把五言绝句一网打尽的节奏啊：）诗人就是诗人，浓缩了所有语言的精华表现出来，非常厉害！梅雨潭太美啦！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 09:00:56

• 美风版主过奖 -老键- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:25:07

• 江雪,把绝句用类似律诗的格式翻译, -移花接木- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 10:11:04

• 问好花木兄 -老键- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:25:50

• Great job! -甜虫虫- ♀ (280 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 11:47:16

• 羚羊呢？他一定有见解：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 12:31:44

• 虫虫佳评，感谢 -老键- ♂ (209 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 14:38:17

• 高水平翻译，大赞！ -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/12/2021 postreply 15:49:00

• 谢忒忒赏读 -老键- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 03:58:49

• 译得好！意境都到了. -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 04:54:01