这句话是否有语病，或是否有更好的说法

As the Chinese saying indicates: two people who have good fate need not to say thanks among them and true friendship is as light, simple and pure as water.

有缘人不言谢，君子之交淡如水。

感谢！

 

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• 觉着 good fate 不合适， 该有更好的， 只是不只是啥。 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/12/2016 postreply 22:45:37

• 缘和KARMA一样应该源于佛教，也许有相应的樊文字 -abookl- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 06:16:59

• 10 Relationship Words That Aren't Translatable Into English -abookl- ♀ (7702 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 06:18:23

• 我也一直觉得“缘”很难翻。不过看本线两位老师的诠译，感觉都相当的不错。 -虔谦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 21:38:47

• 有缘人不言谢，君子之交淡如水。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (294 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 12:33:21

• 谢谢曦亭老师，喜欢！谢谢！ -虔谦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 18:13:59

• 信达而已, 雅则可遇却未必可求. -qianzou- ♂ (144 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 18:14:35

• 感觉好有箴风诗意，学习了！谢谢！ -虔谦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2016 postreply 21:40:44

• 改為need not say thanks，去掉to -spectre007- ♀ (102 bytes) () 04/14/2016 postreply 07:43:15

• 是的，但... -聚曦亭- ♀ (889 bytes) () 04/14/2016 postreply 16:52:56

• 谢谢！ -虔谦- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2016 postreply 18:51:17