"Working in a bakery factory gave me two blisters to my right palm and pain to my toes on both feet."
=> two blisters in the right palm?
=> pain in the toes of both feet?
I'm not too sure, either. Just some suggestions.
"I asked a black girl why today, and I told that they had been frozen"
=> I was told...
Cheer up!
=> two blisters in the right palm?
=> pain in the toes of both feet?
I'm not too sure, either. Just some suggestions.
"I asked a black girl why today, and I told that they had been frozen"
=> I was told...
Cheer up!