One step closer ： 英诗汉译 SUBJECT, VERB, OBJECT by James Richardson

I got a chance to think this over while driving to another state last weekend.  I think that I am one step closer to what James Richardson put in his poem. 

I have been fumbling in my translation and interpretation of this poem.  The discussions helped me a lot.  I picked up some from LinMu's translation, from 京燕有关Caesar的解释。  This is my learning process。  I thank for the discussions。  I still open to discussion。

If you are interested in my modified translation you can follow the link:  http://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/193948.html.  I put a note there to explain my interpretation.

 

所有跟帖： 

• 觉得翻译的挺好，谢谢分享：） -南山松- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/26/2014 postreply 18:22:28

• 我认为这版比前两个版本更接近原文 -g9- ♀ (200 bytes) () 08/26/2014 postreply 19:26:53

• 谢谢你的建议， 很中肯。 -马下人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2014 postreply 20:16:06

• 马才子真是精益求精，学习了。 -~叶子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/26/2014 postreply 20:50:04

• 马下人反复推敲,译诗如写诗,再创作,谢谢你和林木带来的思考探讨^_^ -京燕花园- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2014 postreply 09:31:57

• 谢谢所有的评论和建议。 -马下人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2014 postreply 20:17:07