【春之声活动】中歌英译:西风的话

西风的话 Words of West Wind 北京天使合唱团 译: tern2 去年我回去 你们刚穿新棉袍 今年我来看你们 你们变胖又变高 Last year I went back You （all） began wearing winter coats new This year I came to visit you Stronger and taller you all grew 你们可记得 池里菏花变莲蓬 花少不愁没有颜色 我把树叶都染红 Can you still recollect   Lotuses become basins in the pond Though flowers are few, hues won't be so[1] I'll paint all the leaves red hue 谢谢心喜和bear*****ack对翻译的几处的建议 注：【花少不愁没有颜色】的翻译 --translated by Bear*****ack few though flowers are, hues won't be or few though flowers are, no worries about the little hue or [1]though flowers are few, hues won't be so or though flowers are few, no worries about lack of hue

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• 西风的话好温柔,so nice to see you here dear sis tern(^_^*) -京燕花园- ♀ (147 bytes) () 04/12/2014 postreply 21:35:59

• Look who is here. Big hug, dear sister. Welcome to the forum. -~叶子~- ♀ (56 bytes) () 04/13/2014 postreply 00:59:42

• 动听的童声演唱给人清新的感觉，谢谢桐儿分享好歌好译，周末快乐！ -南山松- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2014 postreply 07:11:46

• 谢谢燕子，叶子，松松和小曼！有空会来跟大家学习。今天种了一天地～～～ -tern2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2014 postreply 15:04:23

• Me too,I mowed the backyard with my red cow(sit-down lawn mover) -京燕花园- ♀ (90 bytes) () 04/13/2014 postreply 18:22:57

• 桐儿译得真棒,美妙的童声,仿佛回到纯真的年代。好久不见bearsback了,问声春天快乐。 -紫君- ♀ (48 bytes) () 04/14/2014 postreply 08:52:03

• 谢谢桐儿分享好歌《西风的话》，好翻译！好演绎！ -北美张师- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/15/2014 postreply 12:03:38