本不想点评，不过我希望逸士能看到自己的不足，从此不再傲气凌人！

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逸士On Beauty第一段
Beauty often dwells in youth.  At sight of a charming girl, everyone will exclaim,  "My eyes!   What a great beauty!"  
1. At sight of -> at the sight of
2. At sight of a charming girl, everyone will exclaim = Chinese English. Exclaim? Wow, but whoever "exclaims" at the sight of a pretty girl will be considered by pedestrians as "*****了". Besides, this "at sight of" is too clunky! "Seeing" is good enough! 
3. My eyes = Chinese English? Dust got into his/her eyes so that he/she cries out "My eyes"?  
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