莎士比亚《Venus and Adonis》翻译 - 137

Which after him she darts, as one on shore

Gazing upon a late-embarked friend,

Till the wild waves will have him seen no more,

Whose ridges with the meeting clouds contend:

So did the merciless and pitchy night

Fold in the object that did feed her sight.

 

男去不舍神女逐， 

挚友登舟目送远， 

目见俊男涛中无， 

浪高及天把云揽：

黑暗争斗无情夜，

目不能见物皆灭。

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• 知道用七字通译的艰辛！谢谢持之以恒！ -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2013 postreply 18:21:40

• 五个字更难玩，那才是功夫！ -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2013 postreply 19:31:28

• 不一样，我处理的只是一首短诗，你要处理一本书，难度应该更大。 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2013 postreply 06:54:02