回复：【祝巨蟹们生日快乐】《我是怎样的爱你》-勃朗宁夫人

I'm so impressed by the graceful performance by beautifulwind. Just as her ID name, it is like a beautiful wind gentally skim over the air, the space, and then to the heart. Thank you!!

I'd love to see the English version. Before see that, I dare to try my version:

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I'm so in love with you,

that i cannot find a single word in every possible dictionary to describe it;

my love for you is as high as sky and as wide and deep as an ocean,

 my soul seems fly over to heaven and down to ocean floor,

to explore the holy secret of life and the great gift from God.

from day to night, i love you always,

like daily food that i must yearn for, i cannot live without your love ;

My love for you is pure,

that it is not belong to any of the flattering, boast or enchanting.

My love for you is dare,

I'll fight for it as if fight for the justice in the world.

Love you

  with all the past pains i suffered and the honesty from my baby time.

Love you

   with all my tears, laughters till the last breathe of mine.

living without you

   my heart would lose the sanity,

living without you

 my heart would lose the passion for a single beat.

oh, God if you may hear me,

 please protect our love and help me to show

that even after my breathe was taken away,

 My love for you would still last ever forever!!

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 ‘How Do I Love Thee?’ (Sonnet 43) by Elizabeth Barrett-Browning

Posted on February 17, 2011by Julia Mayer

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and Ideal Grace. I love thee to the level of every day’s Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light. I love thee freely, as men strive for right. I love thee purely, as they turn from praise. I love thee with the passion put to use In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith. I love thee with a love I seemed to lose With my lost saints. I love thee with the breath, Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose, I shall but love thee better after death.

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• 谢谢美风。我借花现佛:):) -秒秒 - ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2012 postreply 00:46:52

• Great! Like your translation! -NewVoice- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2012 postreply 04:32:11

• 很好！原文有点古文的意思 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2012 postreply 04:42:16

• 你的翻译又快又棒！欣赏！大谢秒秒这么看得起我的朗诵。下次争取读E文的。收藏！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2012 postreply 16:08:02