回复：Translation exercise: [菩萨蛮]

平林漠漠烟如织，寒山一带伤心碧。
暝色入高楼，有人楼上愁。
玉阶空伫立，宿鸟归飞急，何处是归程？
长亭更短亭

Silky vapors enshroud the forest of no green to no end,
Sulky vigors ensconce the green mountain of no warmth.
Aloof a palace permeated with darkness,
Above a person precipitated with sadness.
Jade stairs stand in desolation,
Jaded sparrows return in commotion.
Of no route is the return route,
After a long halt is a short halt. 

 

 

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• Thanks 竹郎庙前多古木，夕阳沉沉山更绿 -sportwoman- ♀ (2301 bytes) () 06/08/2012 postreply 20:39:04

• 回复：看来我的翻译有许多错误，下次仔细读懂原诗，多谢！ -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 17:36:51

• 北美大牛你英语很好。 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 19:02:41

• 是没有人字旁的亭，halt-停 -sportwoman- ♀ (94 bytes) () 06/09/2012 postreply 19:05:01