只给New Voice Mei Mei的哦，呵护有加呀。

你看这样会不会更好？

 

你的：

Summer is on the way; I am awaiting it with impatience. Summer is my best season: it is traveling to a different place, or swimming in the ocean; summer is everything good to eat; it was a thousand colors in a parched landscape; but most of all. summer is reading books.

 

我把你的稍稍修改一下，只供参考：

 

Summer is on its way and I'm impatiently waiting for it to come. It's the best season: traveling to different places, swimming in the ocean, eating everything good, and reading great books. Summer brings a thousand colors into a previously parched landscape.

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• Wow! 改得真好！谢谢！已加到原文。 -NewVoice- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/09/2012 postreply 02:48:08