[写作练习] Writing with Style

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Writing with Style

In writing, style is equally important as substance. A writing style can reveal both the writer's personality and the writer’s literary voice, as best expressed in its Chinese version - 文如其人. Earnest Hemingway is best known for his clean prose, short sentences, and simple words, yet his writing conveys the real truths and provokes the deepest thoughts about life and death. When I read Hemingway’s writings, I rarely encountered new vocabulary words, and could often finish reading several sentences with one breath. Whereas Joseph Heller, in his “Catch 22”, used extensive vocabulary, catch phrases, and non-chronological storyline. While reading “Catch 22”, I had to keep a dictionary closeby and try desperately to put the events together, which are presented out of sequence. Yet I enjoy both styles of writing, just like I enjoy different styles of music, food, and many other things in life.

Talking about the writing style, we can take a look at our very own writers among the net potatoes in this forum. We have our seasoned writers like 非文青, Lilac, and Carpediem and the budding writers like jennea and 九九. Surfer-diver just came out of his hibernation (or diving), and posted his writing “Random thoughts”. While reading their writings, I can’t help but notice their distinctive styles - Lilac’s playfulness with witty words, 非文青’s sharpness and frankness, and Carpediem’s thoughtful revelation and forceful arguments. When I read jennea’s writings, I could not help wondering “Is she a younger version of me” or “I am an older version of her”. Their writing styles are so distinctive that if one of them posts his or her writings with a 马甲, I might still be able to guess who the writer might be. Sometimes I imagine myself running into them at a party and singling out the quick-witted 非文青, the thoughtful Carpediem, the light-hearted Lilac, the bookish jennea, and others among a roomful of party-goers.

To be a good writer, you must develop your own writing style as distinctive as your fingerprints, because it is your way and your voice of telling the world about what you see with your own eyes. Each writer has his or her distinct senses of perceiving the world and distinct relationship with the world. That is why the world of literature is so diverse, rich, and interesting and that is how literature evolves and lives on.  

 

Note: This writing has been revised based on the comments and suggestions from selfselfself,

 

非文学青年, and jennea. Thank you all for making this writing look much better!

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提了几个童鞋的名字,因为跟你们较熟,知道说错了,你们不会在意的。欢迎砖头! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 04:16:20

精彩好文,谢谢分享,中秋快乐。 -珈玥- 给 珈玥 发送悄悄话 珈玥 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 06:37:50

谢谢珈玥鼓励!中秋快乐! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 07:05:08

顶新声姐的又一篇好文!对writers的总结真到位! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 07:55:36

谢美风鼓励!周末好!中秋节好。 -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 09:24:12

好文!我们两个style相同,好高兴~~ -jennea- 给 jennea 发送悄悄话 jennea 的博客首页 (97 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 08:14:32

谢谢 jennea。你太谦虚了。我很喜欢你的 writings, 非常有思想,这是最重要的. -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 10:20:33

顶姐姐好文!一会儿找砖! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 08:30:59

谢顶!等! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 09:30:58

can't help -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (189 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 09:37:17

谢谢妹妹!学了 can't help 的用法。 -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (643 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 10:11:13

CATCH-22 是本难得的书。 -好学又好问- 给 好学又好问 发送悄悄话 好学又好问 的博客首页 (488 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 19:51:41

一直印象Catch 22很难读懂,没敢读过,佩服好学mm! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 22:05:21

这本书实在是歪打正着 -好学又好问- 给 好学又好问 发送悄悄话 好学又好问 的博客首页 (373 bytes) () 09/11/2011 postreply 15:02:23

好学妹妹真是博揽群书啊! -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (2811 bytes) () 09/10/2011 postreply 01:28:55

歪打正着,歪打正着。 -好学又好问- 给 好学又好问 发送悄悄话 好学又好问 的博客首页 (205 bytes) () 09/11/2011 postreply 15:07:46

Good writing. NewVoice: Have a wonderful Mooncake Festival! -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 21:12:20

Thanks! YuGong! You too. -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2011 postreply 06:36:13

试着找砖,找不到。文青来鉴定一下我找的两个问题 -jennea- 给 jennea 发送悄悄话 jennea 的博客首页 (426 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 22:28:28

让我来鉴定?是不是看着我又无聊了?哈哈,我这就去狼读。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (288 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 22:39:10

我语法实在是不确定啊,尤其是介词 -jennea- 给 jennea 发送悄悄话 jennea 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/09/2011 postreply 22:47:16

the 是 3self 让加的. -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (592 bytes) () 09/10/2011 postreply 01:47:26

就喜欢 jnnnea 的认真劲儿! I corrected both. -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 09/10/2011 postreply 01:50:15

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