Motherhood beats all to hell

来源: carpediem 于 2011-08-07 20:19:30 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读： 次 (392 bytes)
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A 7000-squre-foot mansion is an illusion to a mom. Not to mention an old loner's confession which was full of self-pity.

The parallel sentences are very powerful, and the ending is perfect! I only found that two however's in the second paragraph don't sound very soothing:)

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• totally agree！我写的时候也觉得那里不顺，DCH也提出这个问题，我需要再想想。 -非文学青年- ♀ 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 23:28:35

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