Good rewriting~

来源: lilac09 于 2011-07-25 07:19:43 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读： 次 (579 bytes)
回答: 短句好，长的头晕 由 selfselfself 于 2011-07-24 22:44:40

Even with her son kidnapped, she never gave up her hope and still mustered the guts to take on the whole corrupted LAPD, finally getting the truth surfaced.

Here, better to make "finally getting the truth surfaced" a subordinate clause here something like "which finally got..." since it's the main clause that leads to such an result. 

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