我来开个头，请大家使劲批判。文青和drunker有空的化给看看：）

也请drunker给打个分分，不过偶要求最低分是０分总不过分吧，留点面子别给负分：）））

现在有个读书plan。这是今早晨写的几句，算是日记。请多多给砖。

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Last night, no reading. Instead, I slept very early, and therefore woke up very early this morning. Has Summer Solstice come yet? But why I have not felt it? Seems I am still waiting for summer to start.

Showers came down quietly ( at least i didn't hear them) during my sleep without waking me up from my sleeping dreams. The garden quenched its thirst by drinking enough rainfall overnight.

 

It's another bright shiny morning with a few wispy clouds hovering in an otherwise clear blue sky. The cucumbers are growing large enough for me to pick up, followed by the snow beans which are now in flower and forming their pods.

See you late afternoon, my cucumbers; See you after work, my green beauties. I will get around tonight to making you guys a much much more beautiful cucumber salad and cucumber juice. :)).

所有跟帖： 

• Wow,look at these cucumbers.You have a green thumb. -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 20:39:06

• 图是别人的。我家的个没这么大，但量多，自豪：） 给改改英语，紫君君。 -tern2- ♀ (79 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 20:42:02

• 喜欢你自然流畅的文体, 仿佛在读你。 -紫君- ♀ (268 bytes) () 06/23/2011 postreply 11:26:07

• 这个坛子有点欺生。 -tern2- ♀ (19 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 20:43:29

• 写的太好把人震懵了 -hahaman- ♀ (44 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:11:27

• 回复：写的太好把人震懵了 -tern2- ♀ (47 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:14:23

• 其实，这里的老师们真的很好。一般你让老美改，他基本上只纠正语法，除非用的太别扭才给结构。 -tern2- ♀ (99 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:31:01

• my 2 cents... -学英语3151- ♀ (1969 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:01:37

• 万分感谢, 3151 :) -tern2- ♀ (415 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:13:13

• 那句话意思是正在开花并长豆荚（外皮）的意思：） -tern2- ♀ (48 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:26:07

• in flower -hahaman- ♀ (22 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:31:40

• 我明天问问 in flower对不对。想说花开了。 -tern2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:41:41

• rainfall -hahaman- ♀ (126 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 22:03:13

• 谢谢，顺多了。更make sense了。 -tern2- ♀ (58 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 22:09:28

• i see. good. -hahaman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 22:19:32

• 同意改成blossoming。 -tern2- ♀ (58 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:38:55

• 本人的chinglish很棒.就不误导你了。顶一下！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:04:02

• 你的英语很好， -tern2- ♀ (144 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:17:27

• 你是你老公的好老婆。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (56 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:23:05

• 忍不住看了，乱改一气：） -DCH- ♂ (2455 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:38:23

• 去掉I bet， 换句式后它们就多余了。 -DCH- ♂ (53 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:45:51

• 谢谢谢谢，都仔细看了。让我慢慢消化：） -tern2- ♀ (439 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 21:54:57

• 回复：谢谢谢谢，都仔细看了。让我慢慢消化：） -DCH- ♂ (208 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 22:06:28

• 谢谢，第一句改的很好。 -tern2- ♀ (131 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 22:13:35

• 俺来晚了，没得改了，一点小解读 -非文学青年- ♀ (467 bytes) () 06/22/2011 postreply 23:07:07

• 说的很好。谢谢！ -tern2- ♀ (336 bytes) () 06/23/2011 postreply 07:15:33

• 问了另一个人： -tern2- ♀ (227 bytes) () 06/23/2011 postreply 09:24:52

• 我给您87分。原创加6分。 -DrunkerKickass- ♂ (3596 bytes) () 06/23/2011 postreply 02:03:15

• 回上面了。thanks. -tern2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2011 postreply 07:38:17

• 这种借景抒情小散文，一向是我的弱项。不会改，但顶一下。 -cutestream- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2011 postreply 06:06:46

• 谢谢。没想到要写散文或是什么，只是简单地记录几句。 -tern2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2011 postreply 07:40:23