感谢修改，的确增色很多，

I am so grateful for your re-drafting and correction. I should honestly admit that your version is indeeed much better than mine.

This is exactly what I hope and expect from you: inputs, comments,corrections, edition and so on.

It seens that I need to learn more and more deeply the grammar.

How about the second part of my article? Please continue to correct me.

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• you might beg one of sisters here to correct the second half -checkingaround- ♂ (353 bytes) () 10/13/2009 postreply 15:02:25