Starnight did a good job, but...

来源: carpediem 于 2008-11-06 09:15:52 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : 0 (244 bytes)

mountains cannot orderly or disorderly. 乱probably describes mountains with various heights. Here's my version:

At night, while snow melts quietly on the various-heighted mountains, candle light flickers in front of the lonely vagabond.

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• 谢谢！ -灰衣人- ♂ 给 灰衣人 发送悄悄话 灰衣人 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/06/2008 postreply 20:08:45

• you both are so so good... -lovchina- ♀ 给 lovchina 发送悄悄话 (90 bytes) () 11/07/2008 postreply 05:25:11

• Good point on "disorienting" -carpediem- ♂ 给 carpediem 发送悄悄话 carpediem 的博客首页 (113 bytes) () 11/07/2008 postreply 07:36:56

• Good idea. -star-night- ♂ 给 star-night 发送悄悄话 star-night 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/07/2008 postreply 14:29:10

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