你这个机器翻译的文字欠通，大家最好还是读读CDC声明原文

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声明题目是：CDC & FDA Identify Preliminary COVID-19 Vaccine Safety Signal for Persons Aged 65 Years and Older

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Following the availability and use of the updated (bivalent) COVID-19 vaccines, CDC’s Vaccine Safety Datalink (VSD), a near real-time surveillance system, met the statistical criteria to prompt additional investigation into whether there was a safety concern for ischemic stroke in people ages 65 and older who received the Pfizer-BioNTech COVID-19 Vaccine, Bivalent. Rapid-response investigation of the signal in the VSD raised a question of whether people 65 and older who have received the Pfizer-BioNTech COVID-19 Vaccine, Bivalent were more likely to have an ischemic stroke in the 21 days following vaccination compared with days 22-42 following vaccination.

你的编译用了“有人”这个词，这是错误的，不是有人，而是CDC系统本身自动报警 prompt additional investigation

所有跟帖： 

• 谢谢你的提示纠正，正因为如此，我将来源也放在文里。 谢谢 -休闲时- ♂ 给 休闲时 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2023 postreply 06:46:36

• 原文的直接翻译是，在周五的声明中，CDC表示，尚未确定Moderna 二价疫苗的信号 -dudaan- ♂ 给 dudaan 发送悄悄话 dudaan 的博客首页 (467 bytes) () 01/14/2023 postreply 07:05:14

• 而你却漏掉了中心词Moderna，这会让大家认为辉瑞也没确定 -dudaan- ♂ 给 dudaan 发送悄悄话 dudaan 的博客首页 (81 bytes) () 01/14/2023 postreply 07:11:40

• 机器翻译，看也不看直接贴出的文字，越来越多了。 -TBz- ♂ 给 TBz 发送悄悄话 TBz 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 01/14/2023 postreply 08:56:12

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