伯牙子期版
Missing you at the autumn night
Wondering upon cooling light
Falling pine-cone keeps empty mountain quite
Who stays upright tonight?
怀春版
Missing you at the autumn night
Wondering upon cooling light
Empty mountain sees falling pine-cone bright
She stays sleepless tight
我对诗歌的理解非常狭隘-----没有韵脚，无以成歌。所以诗歌追求韵律是我的迷信教条
