哈哈，昨天读题不细，解题错误，我以为老韦是在怀春。改了改了---伯牙子期版

 伯牙子期版

Missing you at the autumn night 
Wondering upon cooling light 
Falling pine-cone keeps empty mountain quite

Who stays upright tonight?

怀春版

Missing you at the autumn night 

Wondering upon cooling light 

Empty mountain sees falling pine-cone bright 

She stays sleepless tight 

我对诗歌的理解非常狭隘-----没有韵脚，无以成歌。所以诗歌追求韵律是我的迷信教条