四句都译了

本帖于 2022-03-30 04:14:17 时间, 由普通用户 leappad 编辑

四句全译,押韵的不够, 试用两个双关,chilling有cold和fun意思,sound有声音和沉(睡)意思

怀君属秋夜

散步咏凉天

空山松子落

幽人应未眠

having you in my mind at this autumn night
wandering off, chanting chilling moment  in my lyric
pine cones dropping toward the depth of the mountain

Alone there shall you be not falling in sound asleep

 

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