不是专家，但是感觉有点别扭……尤其是最后一段的convince

另外，长句太多，一个句子里太多意思。
大概写了下，抛砖引玉吧

Thank you for giving me the opportunity. It was nice to talk with you and to share your vision about the position. I get more excited after the interview and feel confident that I will be a good fit.

In terms of my ability to handle long working hours, it is nothing new to me. My current position has similar requirements. And I am experienced in handling the pressure and tight schedule. Moreover, I always deliver the desired results/products on time.

I believe this is the job I am looking for (or add: and the company/team sounds like somewhere I'd like to join), and my expertise and experience match your vision.

Please let me know if you need anything else, and I'll be more than happy to be of assistance.

Thanks again, and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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