请帮忙看看， 大谢！

Dear Mr. XXX

Thank you so
much for your time and the chance of having an interview with you. The XXX position you outlined sounds challenging and rewarding and I look
forward to your decision concerning an on-site visit.

Speaking of long hours during the close and budgeting, I do work over time during month end at my current job because ABC is a publicly traded company like XYZ.  They have a very tight schedule.

Please let me know what else you need to convince you that
I can succeed in the job. Please feel free to contact me either by phone or
email.

 

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• Good luck! -wave_forest- ♂ (629 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 13:40:28

• 谢谢啦，太谢谢啦 -liveinca- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 14:04:19

• 不是专家，但是感觉有点别扭……尤其是最后一段的convince -豆豆L- ♂ (1004 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 13:57:58

• 谢谢豆豆了，我的英语让人着急 -liveinca- ♀ (65 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 14:03:31

• Much more smoother -a3a4- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 15:22:10

• 看进来 -臭臭妈妈- ♀ (852 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 15:16:32

• 这个英文正宗。 -stillsingle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 21:04:22

• 过奖！ ：） -臭臭妈妈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/09/2015 postreply 09:54:09

• 这是在搞征文大赛吗，很好。 -arcsigh- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/08/2015 postreply 17:52:39