紧急求助--PERFORMANCE REVIEW

其中有一项是：COMMUNICATION： Degree to which the individual expresses ideas in a clear and concise manner. Consider organization of thoughts and
overall skills in both oral and written communications

我的英文不算差，但是也没有牛到可以和老板吹得天花乱坠的地步。老板去年就说我说话太快，就这个差的地方，其实我说中文也这样快。

各位兄弟姐妹给点建议，我如何写这段好，谢谢啦

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• Speak slowly. -jill08- ♀ (25 bytes) () 11/24/2009 postreply 20:01:12

• (ZT)Speak slowly, + clearly, lol -实干家- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/25/2009 postreply 00:22:30

• Very good. LOL -jill08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/25/2009 postreply 07:01:34

• rate urself out of 10? ---7 or 8 for me -撅着挺好- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/24/2009 postreply 20:22:39

• 回复：rate urself out of 10? ---7 or 8 for me -非典型小菜鸟- ♂ (32 bytes) () 11/24/2009 postreply 20:45:56

• try to emphsize on... -撅着挺好- ♂ (328 bytes) () 11/24/2009 postreply 21:07:03

• 回复：try to emphsize on... -非典型小菜鸟- ♂ (7 bytes) () 11/24/2009 postreply 21:10:49