The window --- By Diane di Prima

《The Window》

you are my bread
and the hairline noise
of my bones
you are almost
the sea

you are not stone
or molten sound
I think
you have no hands

this kind of bird flies backwards
and this love
breaks on a windowpane
where no light talks

this is not the time
for crossing tongues
(the sand here
never shifts)

I think
tomorrow
turned you with his toe
and you will
shine
and shine
unspent and underground

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 俺的鸟，放这儿～这首争来争去的，翻的很过瘾～～～喜欢的试试哈：) -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 06:52:18

• 看着姑姑的 -marilyn- ♀ (23 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 17:46:40

• 跟着鸟儿的感觉飘～～～；) -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:53:05

• 像是描述无望而又难以放下的单恋。等才子才女们来翻译。 -禾口- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 08:40:32

• 恩，情到深处小怨尤滴味道～～：))) -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:53:42

• 译文参考，放狗 -ephd- ♂ (1780 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 14:35:15

• 哈，翻得挺有诗意，佩服狗， -sansemao- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 22:14:04

• +1 -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:54:10

• 看不懂这诗，觉得纯粹为押韵那，太现代 -sansemao- ♀ (1570 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 22:46:00

• 仿佛不押韵？…喜欢前两段的翻译。 -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:55:23

• 没韵。这首我比较无感，就不容易贴上韵 -sansemao- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:04:18

• 哦，原诗也没韵，所以不加韵也挺好的～～我喜欢这首的空灵寂寥：) -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:12:39

• 转得硬，对我来说 -sansemao- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:14:15

• 我正相反，不喜欢韵蜜了、太滑溜儿～～～：) -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:29:33

• 有时间和姑姑好好讨论讨论诗歌。以后多上一些。来 -立- ♀ (20 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 01:03:53

• 啵啵啵啵啵啵啵啵～～～ -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:55:51

• 看到第一句就感动了.面包!我今天没吃早饭. -小小月- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 08:09:55

• bingo!!!!俺是一读再读滴喜欢，每次的感动都不同～～～也非常欣赏诗里的小幽默与撒娇：) -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 10:03:43

• 请给解释解释这里的小幽默和撒娇，读着感觉 -立- ♀ (84 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 13:02:08

• 好的，等等我细写一下对这首诗的理解～：)) -永无乡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 19:10:11